We all have numerous desires, worth dying for.
Few are fulfilled and few remains only a dream.
While I was busy making efforts to fulfill my desires,
I forgot to realise love has no desire, but only to meld within your own needs.
If love is true, it flows in the river of your mood swings.
Your unhappiness makes the love sad, and rejoices in your happiness.
Love prayers for you to return home safely with gratitude.
Making a thankful note of prayer as each day passes.
Making me realise it’s never to late to understand the difference between love vs desire vs want.
P.S : I am not Good in expressing myself in poems. Those who are perfect in poems kindly excuse the errors and correct me for the improvement.
Nice!!💖
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there are no corrections possible to the speaking of an honest heart. Peace and love to you and yours.
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Thank you
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Beautiful! Love it 😊
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Atleast you tried to explore poems… And I dont know much about writing poems as I am also not good at it, but I can surely say that your poem is simply amazing… Keep up
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Thank you. I too can’t write it’s just sometimes try
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Atleast you tried… I can’t even try…
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When the heart speaks, that’s poetry! No corrections ever needed 🙂 ❤
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I wonder sometimes if we truly love someone we let go of our desires. We let them be free to be themselves unconditionally. Maybe its an ideal to strive for?
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Quite difficult question asked
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Pure expressions from the heart are always priceless. Beautiful piece of work Tanvir 💖
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Thank you Radhika
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Lovely
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Bahut hi khubsurat likha hai…..jab dil se likhaa jaataa hai to ek ek shabd dil tak pahuchta hai….phir usmen khamiyan kaisi………prem ki koyee eksha nahi hoti…….sirf ek eksha hoti hai…..jo bhi hai mere paas le jaawo jisse tumhari bhala ho.
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Thank you sir
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You are excellent in expressing human values. Your writing always inspires , it teaches life in most beautiful way.
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Thank you . You always encourage me with positive thoughts
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🙏😍
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Very well said.
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Great work, wonderful read.<3
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no need to apologize for expressing your feelings in any manner you feel you can express them. buddhist teachings state desire causes suffering.
dont worry so much about what others may feel about your writing style, the important part is to write.. release the desire.
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Thank you so much
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youre welcome
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Its nice and wonderful….
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Nicely penned Tanvir 🙂
I have gifted you the Versatile Blogger award…. https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2019/02/22/the-versatile-blogger-award/
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Thank you so much 😊 after a long time will surely participate
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In truth Tanvir, you don’t need to respond – you could just accept it as the gift it is 🙂
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Thank you but I truly want to participate this time. 😊
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Beautiful.
Love has no desires. Contentment has no desires.
Great post.
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Thank you Bella
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Your soul don’t need corrections!! LOVELY and TRUE!!!!
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Marvelous poetic thoughts and so well composed on desire and love, Tanvir. To thank God for everything is so nice to live a fulfilling life.
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ha ha! Bravo! I would add… 2 lines:
1… Those who are perfect cannot write poems…
2… Where perfection ends, poetry begins!
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That’s sweet
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